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ojaun's avatar

I’m in love with how you build the atmosphere! It feels like I’m right there with the characters.

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beckyrock's avatar

This felt like a perfect blend of adventure and heart!

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shegnet's avatar

The chapter opens with a gripping description of Kimarya's struggle, immediately drawing readers into her dire situation.

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